the chapters just keep getting better, good job
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- Gathering For A Swinging Wake
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Destiny at the Haunted Mansion
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Posts: 330 (01/30/07 23:28:08) Ballroom Dancer |
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Ghost Host
Posts: 977 (02/03/07 00:21:55) Ghost Host |
Thank you, everyone! It really means a lot that you take the time to leave notes, reviews, and even corrections! You keep reading and I'll keep writing.
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FreesFreak999 |
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Ghost Host
Posts: 977 (05/16/07 16:05:05) Ghost Host |
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irishartist |
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Ballroom Dancer
Posts: 300 (05/18/07 08:45:28) Silly Spook |
 Freesfreak: I've gotta tell you--your Chapters just get better and better! I think I've seen that Diner waitress...she works at the IHOP across Harbor Blvd from Disneyland--right?!  I enjoy your writing more than I can say...you should gather up your completed Destiny story, put it on paper, and submit it to Hyperian Publishing (aka: Disney Publishing). You'd have a best-seller on your hands!  Looking forward with anticipation to more Destiny chapters...although I fear there may not be too many more! I really love your writing.  ~irishartist PS: Say hi to G/H for me! 
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Wall-to-Wall Creep
Posts: 1992 (06/06/07 15:45:25) Wall-to-Wall Creep |
I know I already left a review on ff.net, but I'd like to leave another one here as well.
Another wonderful chapter as always. I completely agree with IrisihArtists, and saying that this story certainly deserves of one being published. I love the idea of Leota hypnotizing Craig. Makes me crack up everytime that I read it. I can't wait to read more! |
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Silly Spook
Posts: 232 (08/16/07 13:20:44) Silly Spook |
Soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo...
When can we expect the next chapter up? It's like torture not reading anything new on the novel. |
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Ballroom Dancer
Posts: 300 (08/27/07 15:10:38) Silly Spook |
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Ghost Host
Posts: 977 (09/15/07 12:00:55) Ghost Host |
I just want to say sorry that it's taken so long with this new chapter. I really appreciate everyone's kind notes and I'm sorry I've kept readers waiting. I've just been busy, so my stories have been pushed back a bit. I keep working on them though, so it WILL be finished. I am very VERY stubborn when it comes to my projects, even if I don't get paid or graded for them. This will be completed, gosh darnit!
  Thanks again everyone for all of your encouragement and help! If it wasn't for you guys, "Destiny" wouldn't have gotten far past the first couple of chapters and turned into something that's been such a joy to write. I know it seems like I'm making too big a deal out of it, but because of the feedback I get, the notes, the corrections and constructive criticism, I've got a lot more confidence in my writing ability. I'm less frightened of the thought of submitting some of my non-fanfic stories to publishers. (There's quite a few. But they're still all about ghouls, and vampires, and werewolves and the like.  With a wealth of awful amounts of asinine alliteration, of course.  ) I just can't thank the folks here at DB and fanfiction.net enough for taking the time to read my tales and critique and comment on them. You guys rock!
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FreesFreak999 |
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Ghost Host
Posts: 977 (04/03/08 13:35:35) Ghost Host |
I know it's taken a long while for this new chapter, and I thank everyone for their patience.
A huge thank you to Ghost Host and Jase for their help in editing. Here's chapter 42! Chapter 42 |
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Popup Ghost
Posts: 532 (04/03/08 17:08:17) Ballroom Dancer |
Great chapter FreesFreak! I can't wait to read the rest!
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irishartist |
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Ballroom Dancer
Posts: 300 (04/04/08 07:38:01) Silly Spook |
Can't wait to hear the talk between the two Destiny's!    ~irishartist
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Wall-to-Wall Creep
Posts: 1992 (04/22/08 19:54:33) Wall-to-Wall Creep |
I'm so sorry I'm late in responding, but another great chapter, FF! I love Clairece's little revenge against the spirits, and how you keep fleshing out Dustin and Destiny's relationship in this chapter. I think your writing skills just keep on greatly improving (although they were terrific to start with), and I think it especially shows in this chapter. I can't wait to read what happens next!
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Ghost Host
Posts: 925 (09/22/08 18:41:54) Ghost Host |
Thank you so much, everyone! I really can't say enough how much your kind words mean to me!
It's been a while, but I've finally gotten the next chapter done. I warn you, it is very dark and very emotional. It went through a bunch of tweaking and re-workings, hence why it took so long to get finished. I hope you like it. Chapter 43 |
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Popup Ghost
Posts: 461 (09/23/08 11:23:13) Ballroom Dancer |
Yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees!!! I had almost given up hope! I love this chapter, great work, I can't say enough!! Update soon!!
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Ghost Host
Posts: 926 (09/23/08 20:16:04) Ghost Host |
Thank you!
I can't promise when the next chapter will be up, but
I'll try to get started on it soon. Thank you for all your support!
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irishartist |
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Ballroom Dancer
Posts: 251 (09/24/08 08:52:16) Silly Spook |
Freesfreak:
What a GREAT Chapter! The reader learns what makes Madame Leota the way she is--brilliant! Very poigant--I cried! Glad Destiny was there for Leota--REALLY looking forward to new Chapters. You are an amazing writer! ~irishartist
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Ghost Host
Posts: 927 (09/27/08 09:38:03) Ghost Host |
Thank you so much! This has probably been the most emotionally exhaustive chapter of anything I've ever written. Even I was teary eyed writing it! Thank
you again for always taking the time to leave a note. It means a lot to me. It's given me the confidence not only to keep plugging away at this project,
but to seek publication for my non-fandom stories.
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Foolish Mortal
Posts: 6 (10/05/08 19:14:17) |
I am really enjoying reading this!!!!!!!
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Ghost Host
Posts: 939 (10/06/08 16:31:27) Ghost Host |
Thank you!
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Ghost Host
Posts: 950 (04/20/09 16:42:14) Ghost Host |
It's been a while, but I'm back. It was nice to finally have a non-school related writing spree. Here's the latest chapter, fresh from my brain
and onto your screen--Eww, sounds kinda gross.
Chapter 44: Asher's Afterlife Angst |
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- Our Mouldering Sanctum
- Welcome, Foolish Mortals
- Where Hinges Creak in Doorless Chambers
- Gathering For A Swinging Wake
- No Flash Pictures, Please
- Frightfully Sensitive to Bright Lights
- Creepy Old Crypts
- Club 33
- Chilling Challenges
- Madame Leota's Cart
- And a Ghost Will Follow You Home
- Here, in this Gallery
- Only Ghost Stories Of Course
