GREAT chapter...I feel like I'm holding my breath to
read the next one to see what George can possibly tell Rosalie!
Very impressive descriptive word-pictures, too, I must say...
that library sounds really cool!
Looking forward to Chapter 6.
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Oh my gosh! I didn't see that coming!
GREAT chapter...I feel like I'm holding my breath to read the next one to see what George can possibly tell Rosalie! Very impressive descriptive word-pictures, too, I must say... that library sounds really cool! Looking forward to Chapter 6. |
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yay i suprised someone.. yeah pretty much took some inspiration from the movie study but added my own stuff. Instead of a fireplace i wanted a huge window..
etc. so yeah thanks for reading.
Gracey gots some explaining to do.... |
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Like heck he does! Great chapter MadameGracey! I have it on story alert!
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thanks so much!
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Chapter 6 up now!
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Omg this keeps on double posting, my apologies |
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Jemima947 |
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Another awesome chapter!!
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irishartist |
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I really like the description of "coldness"...how Rosalie can feel Emma or George's coldness since she's mortal and they're not. Very
well done! Hope the writer's block ends soon--this is a GREAT story!~irishartist
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^^ thanks so much!
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MadameGracey |
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Chapter 7 Up NOW!
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irishartist |
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Chapter 7 already--wonderful!
I really like your use of details and description. Makes the reader able to visualize the story. GREAT work! ~irishartist |
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Love it! Love it! Love it!
Update soon!!!!! |
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MadameGracey |
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^ thanks so much guys!
Chapter 8 is now up! |
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Jemima947 |
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Still love it! The drama!!
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irishartist |
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Okay--now I have a crush on George Gracey!
It such a good story in that "realness" and how the characters feel-- living and dead, too! Can't wait for more Chapters--well done! ~irishartist |
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irishartist- gaaahw! Thanks, When i write i try to feel what the character is feeling then write it.
Thanks for leaving "detailed" comments! Jemima947- Thanks so much for reading! |
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You make me feel insignifigant.
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Jemima947 wrote:Sorry |
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*srry for the double post*
Chapter 9 up |
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The hitchikers arguing about Rosealie's name made me laugh! Great chapter as always!
~Jemi edit: typos, i hate 'em |
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